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Post by Raven on Oct 1, 2016 1:43:52 GMT
While going back over all submitted sheets, I noticed yours keeps saying "in the user's trash" when I open it. It also is still incomplete. Are you still applying for this game, or are you going to withdraw your application?
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Post by Raven on Oct 1, 2016 1:55:20 GMT
woventears - I was reviewing your sheet and noticed that you gave your Pokemon some skill backgrounds. While I don't mind this, you cannot "rank down" a skill that was already at Pathetic, or one that your Pokemon did not already have. Generally speaking, Pokemon have 0 ranks in all Education skills, and the 1d6 in the cell is just filler. Therefore, Chespin cannot rank down his Gen Edu, as he has none to lose. Additionally, your Ralts' Base Stat Ratio is improper. You must raise Special Defense before you can raise any stat below it (though no higher than its Speed -1). Also, you may have up to 3 Poke Balls for free (as mentioned previously in this thread and the skype chat), and receive a refund for any money spent on Poke Balls up to this amount. oddeyes - Review of your sheet revealed that Chikorita's BSR is improper as well. Speed is its lowest stat due to its Nature, and therefore cannot be raised above any other stat. Additionally, its HP is higher than its Special Defense stat, so you need to fix that as well. Your Ratio is as follows: Defense > Special Defense > HP/ATK/SATK > Speed. Only an Enduring Soul can boost HP above all else without needing to "correct" its BSR. stygianrose - Overall a good sheet, mechanically. Just a couple of minor gripes from me. I'd appreciate it if you could give your character a proper name. Even just a nickname will do. "Spin to Win" is more a description of your character theme than a name. If you could also put your Pokemon on the Trainer page (under current team) I'd be grateful. MagisterSphinx - Mechanically sound, but missing the fluff bits of your character. Not having that may reduce your chances of getting in. Black Crescent - You seem to be using an older version of the character sheet, as your Venpede's Defense Curl has the wrong description. It was changed in the September Playtest Packet to grant +1 Defense CS instead of 10 DR. This is part of why I suggested using the Version Dunsparce sheet I linked in the original post. Other than this discrepancy, it all looks fine. carnackiArdent - The only feedback I have for you at this time is about the formatting of your description and Personality fields. They look like one giant paragraph, making them more difficult to read. If you could split these up into a couple of paragraphs, it'd be much easier to decipher. Thanks!
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Post by woventears on Oct 1, 2016 2:13:43 GMT
Raven I didn't change any of those, they must have been off since the first time you looked at them haha. I'll go over them and fix them now.
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Post by Raven on Oct 1, 2016 2:24:58 GMT
Raven I didn't change any of those, they must have been off since the first time you looked at them haha. I'll go over them and fix them now. I probably didn't look hard enough the first time, but I appreciate you going back to fix them anyway.
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Post by carnackiArdent on Oct 1, 2016 2:29:12 GMT
Raven: Okay, I stuck some breaks in! Sorry about that! Sometimes I don't realize how long they get.
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Post by ninaether on Oct 1, 2016 4:37:07 GMT
Here's Millet Essig a Backpacker and Mentor! Survival/Intuition based supporter that can hold his own in a fight. Notes: I have already applied the Mentor Lesson Empowered Development to my starter Ferroseed (Which I also plan to do for Totodile when the first opportunity arises) I had to take 2 skill stunts for Backpacker and chose Survival (Scouting areas check) and Intuition (see through lies) I look forward to potentially playing with you guys, let me know if anything needs to be tweaked.
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Post by Raven on Oct 1, 2016 5:07:30 GMT
Here's Millet Essig a Backpacker and Mentor! Survival/Intuition based supporter that can hold his own in a fight. Notes: I have already applied the Mentor Lesson Empowered Development to my starter Ferroseed (Which I also plan to do for Totodile when the first opportunity arises) I had to take 2 skill stunts for Backpacker and chose Survival (Scouting areas check) and Intuition (see through lies) I look forward to potentially playing with you guys, let me know if anything needs to be tweaked. After double-checking a few things, it all looks good. Adding you to the list. Alright, folks, I'm leaving applications open until Midnight (1 hour from now). After that, I won't be accepting any new applications to the game.
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Post by imyourbiggestdonphan on Oct 1, 2016 6:15:54 GMT
Finished up those last few touch ups
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Post by Raven on Oct 1, 2016 6:46:29 GMT
Finished up those last few touch ups Somehow had forgotten to add you to the table. You're on there now though, so I won't forget to consider your app. @everyone - If you haven't done it yet, don't forget to add your owned Pokemon to your Dex. You may not officially have your Poké Tome yet, but capture XP still counts.
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Post by GM_3826 on Oct 1, 2016 11:56:02 GMT
I'm going to withdraw my application.
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Post by Raven on Oct 1, 2016 20:26:33 GMT
Final Roster of players: Sano Malakyth ( UmbralHero), Tiki ( oddeyes), Divini Monteblanc ( Black Crescent), and Clay ( carnackiArdent). Thanks to all who applied, and I wish you all better luck in your future applications. If, for some reason, a player is no longer able to participate in the game, replacements will be drawn from the list of applicants.
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