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Post by Joshuwatt on Aug 11, 2016 5:43:03 GMT
Joshuwatt Good backstory and mechanics. A few issues: Your starter is meant to start with 1 egg move and then gain another at level 20 or 30. Mostly so you don't have to put up with only 2 moves. There's no indication of what classes you may take later, making my planning harder if you want a supernatural class. Okay added an Egg move, I'd rather wait 1 level for Thundershock and until 30 for Signal Beam than to take Uproar to be honest. Sorry not trying to make things difficult for planning like that. He's not sure if he has a favorite type or anything like that. With how he is he might have gain a connection to electric types due to how often he's around technology? He does have good Technology Education for Electric Ace and Novice Acrobatics so that could lead to Spark Master? Again sorry, not trying to make things difficult for planning,
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Post by Raven on Aug 11, 2016 6:53:52 GMT
I'll try to come up with a little more for Lilith's background, but I'd like some clarification on "Shedinja may be hard to handle" and "more details on the wishlist". I understand Shedinja is a literal glass cannon, but how exactly is it "hard to handle"? It has 5 type weaknesses that can take it out with ease, only two of which would have to worry about SE hits (Ghost and Dark). Not to mention entry hazards, weather, and status effects will KO it.
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Post by twilightkiwi on Aug 11, 2016 7:02:54 GMT
Alrighty, I'll link my sheet here when I get home from work in the morning.
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Post by stygianrose on Aug 11, 2016 9:22:50 GMT
Here is Stephan for feedback! Crunch is done, fluff to follow.
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Post by MagisterSphinx on Aug 11, 2016 9:45:01 GMT
Joshuwatt Good backstory and mechanics. A few issues: Your starter is meant to start with 1 egg move and then gain another at level 20 or 30. Mostly so you don't have to put up with only 2 moves. There's no indication of what classes you may take later, making my planning harder if you want a supernatural class. Okay added an Egg move, I'd rather wait 1 level for Thundershock and until 30 for Signal Beam than to take Uproar to be honest. Sorry not trying to make things difficult for planning like that. He's not sure if he has a favorite type or anything like that. With how he is he might have gain a connection to electric types due to how often he's around technology? He does have good Technology Education for Electric Ace and Novice Acrobatics so that could lead to Spark Master? Again sorry, not trying to make things difficult for planning, Well if thats with the case for the egg moves I'm fine with letting you be different. And all I mean is that different supernatural classes will become available based on your actions. So if we know what people are looking for, we can make sure they get what they want at the right time. I'll try to come up with a little more for Lilith's background, but I'd like some clarification on "Shedinja may be hard to handle" and "more details on the wishlist". I understand Shedinja is a literal glass cannon, but how exactly is it "hard to handle"? It has 5 type weaknesses that can take it out with ease, only two of which would have to worry about SE hits (Ghost and Dark). Not to mention entry hazards, weather, and status effects will KO it. It won't be Ghost/Bug, so we need to be think it over more. Thus it (and Nincada) probably won't be one of the first pokemon you see is all that I meant. Here is Stephan for feedback! Crunch is done, fluff to follow. Looks fine mechanically - no idea what Enchanting Gaze is though
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Post by TrueEndingEliza on Aug 11, 2016 13:14:49 GMT
By the way, added a backstory and clarified future goals (in and out of character, granted that I haven't thought through the future of my build too much until a minute ago, and it depends on whether I stay focused on TC or if I hedge on Poke-support).
That said, I am also debating changing my starting pokemon.
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Post by Joshuwatt on Aug 11, 2016 14:13:08 GMT
Okay added an Egg move, I'd rather wait 1 level for Thundershock and until 30 for Signal Beam than to take Uproar to be honest. Sorry not trying to make things difficult for planning like that. He's not sure if he has a favorite type or anything like that. With how he is he might have gain a connection to electric types due to how often he's around technology? He does have good Technology Education for Electric Ace and Novice Acrobatics so that could lead to Spark Master? Again sorry, not trying to make things difficult for planning, Well if thats with the case for the egg moves I'm fine with letting you be different. And all I mean is that different supernatural classes will become available based on your actions. So if we know what people are looking for, we can make sure they get what they want at the right time. Alright, well I'll think it over, Iron Defense vs Recycle in the future. Ah, okay. Well what I said stands, like if he was going to be more connected to any type it would most likely be Electric Type.
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Post by twilightkiwi on Aug 11, 2016 15:42:57 GMT
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Post by Joshuwatt on Aug 11, 2016 16:46:06 GMT
Added some ideas for future classes as well as possible supernatural stuff to help you plan.
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Post by DarnellJermaine on Aug 11, 2016 17:29:10 GMT
Here's my character submission Jeremy I didn't give him a sleeping bag or tent or anything since you mentioned the characters would be given some survival gear- though if necessary I can change around the items he bought if he needs to purchase those things.
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Post by Raven on Aug 11, 2016 17:38:34 GMT
Why would it not be? GM type change in effect on it? I don't mind if it's not the first Pokemon I bump into, I'm just curious as to what it would be if not ghost/bug.
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Post by Faithless on Aug 11, 2016 20:01:36 GMT
Why would it not be? GM type change in effect on it? I don't mind if it's not the first Pokemon I bump into, I'm just curious as to what it would be if not ghost/bug. Barring a couple of exceptions, pretty much everything is getting a typeshift.
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Post by Raven on Aug 11, 2016 20:10:52 GMT
Why would it not be? GM type change in effect on it? I don't mind if it's not the first Pokemon I bump into, I'm just curious as to what it would be if not ghost/bug. Barring a couple of exceptions, pretty much everything is getting a typeshift. Well that seems rather excessive. I thought it was going to be a rare thing, not a "okay, everything is type shifted!" type of deal. :/
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Post by sixer on Aug 11, 2016 21:17:48 GMT
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Post by endlessrain on Aug 15, 2016 14:05:49 GMT
Expressing interest, build is WIP but should be done later today. It's late rn and I'm busy but here's what I have so far. Missing starter and fluff, since the two are pretty closely linked. Will update when I have time I guess haha.
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Post by Vivian on Aug 16, 2016 19:49:39 GMT
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Post by carnackiArdent on Aug 16, 2016 21:11:44 GMT
Okay, I finally have her all together: meet Viviane Mangrove, an aspiring marine biologist looking to study all the unusual Pokémon in Ignotus! (She's a Water Ace/Researcher (Caretaking and Jailbreaker), with a perfectly ordinary Horsea.) Her inventory may wind up changing depending on what survival gear gets provided (or doesn't), but I think I have her pretty well put together for now.
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Post by Goliathus on Aug 17, 2016 3:16:16 GMT
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Post by MagisterSphinx on Aug 17, 2016 3:53:31 GMT
To my great joy I can announce that Warr will be joining myself and Faithless as a GM. As such there are several things that should be noted: -We will each be taking 3 players to form a team of novices at each of the three guilds. -My players will be the newest members of Exploration Guild Tourmaline, led by Guildmaster Vren Vhitaker, based in Calico and with a guild wide focus on individual strength and accomplishments -Faithless' players will be members of Exploration Guild Sardonyx, based in Argenport and led by Guildmaster Mullen -Warr's players will be members of Exploration Guild Lapis, based in Argenport and led by Guildmaster Edward Mahogany. They will each post any information about their guild they feel is relevant Other notes: -The guild ranks go from Novice (requires supervision by an Explorer), Apprentice (can go on missions in groups), Explorer (can go out solo), Master Explorer (more prestige, more responsibility) and Guildmaster (in charge of the guild) -Your Guild will make the services of smiths, alchemists, mentors and other support staff available, but for a cost. -You will receive supplies of firewood, food, bedrolls, tents and some other survival gear for free from your guild. This could change later and its entirely possibly you will need to scavenge for additional supplies while in the wilderness.
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Post by MagisterSphinx on Aug 17, 2016 4:39:20 GMT
Feedback: amillaiara No criticism beyond how your backstory needs a paragraph break to legibility and my urge to criticise using N as the picture. The notebook is an awesome touch. carnackiArdent No criticism. Viviane looks good. DarnellJermaine Single classed rich boy! No mechanical complaints and no real flavour complaint, but any extra backstory or details on future class plans you add can only help your application. As could a surname. endlessrain Covered online already. Goliathus Hoo boy. Fine mechanically with an interesting backstory, though the rp implications of the sexism bit makes me a little wary. I'm not saying you can't play it, just that it makes me think about Nikandros more carefully. Joshuwatt No criticism other than the fact that Klink seems to be missing one of its 2 egg moves. madandy Still fine TrueEndingEliza Wow that's a small wishlist. All good otherwise matanui3 No mechanical complaints and no real flavour complaint, but any extra backstory or details on future class plans you add can only help your application. Nether All good Raven Looks good, but any information you add regarding future plans can only help you. Same with a nickname for Butterfree. Nocturne All good shadowblaze94 Looks good sixer Now thats a familiar picture. You lack everything other than a mechanical base. If you don't go back and add stuff in you probably won't be selected as is. stygianrose Looks good mechanically, though you too are missing a lot of fluff stuff. Please fix this before friday twilightkiwi Looks good Vivian Looks fine
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