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Post by stygianrose on Jul 27, 2016 14:29:16 GMT
So, to clarify since the main post was not updated but you mentioned it in comments-
Rock-type Starters can be Rock/Any, which means Tyrunt is a legal starter?
I assume so, because you okayed Fossils?
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Post by twilightkiwi on Jul 27, 2016 16:04:10 GMT
Maku has been aged down, and his background adjusted accordingly.
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Post by Boolprop on Jul 27, 2016 21:35:50 GMT
Here is Shu An Wei, practitioner of the Cheng Long style of the Wood Temple. It's WIP...
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Post by Elyander on Jul 28, 2016 0:44:57 GMT
Ok, so, I think I have done everything for this. Here's Quàn Yù, Student of the Patient Stance, Probopass Style. A not-so-beautiful tank! Tell me if there's something missing or in need of change, ok?
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Post by gameofchampions on Jul 28, 2016 2:45:30 GMT
OK so I have the mechanics for Lyra Renaldi up and ready to go! She is a folower of the Wood Temple and of her personal style of Cacnea Shurukinjutsu based on the study of the precision needle placements of her Cacnea Duke. I'm working on her backstory as we speak. So one other question I guess I have is should I change the name? I know it is an Asian style setting and I'm not to attached to the name if I need to change it.
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Post by Rhewlif_Dewdrop on Jul 28, 2016 11:40:23 GMT
stygianroseNo, I've edited in the available starters to the game main post so please take a look at it. I've okay-ed fossils but they still must follow the starter's Elemental Rules. twilightkiwiAlright, everything looks good and accounted for. Status: Complete BoolpropWhat a ladies' killer! Everything looks goo mechanically. I look forward to seeing what's beyond those Baby-Doll Eyes. ElyanderI am impressed with the amount of fluff you've given me! Fluff wise everything looks good. Your sheets have a couple of errors on it however. You have written down your 6th level bonus edge already when you are still level 5. You have an Expert level Skill rank and consequentially Expert Skill Edge when you shouldn't. (I assume that you meant to change it out with Categorical Inclination (Body)) gameofchampionsYou have several errors on your sheet. You have novice rank command when you don't have the skill edge for it. You have 1 Feat point in HP that shouldn't be there. I can't tell if you are going with a bow or a shuriken. List me your Pokémon's egg moves and when they will earn them. Also it would be best that you change the name. The more your character fits the theme the more I'll like it and the more likely it will get in the game. Lyra is also considered a child-not-yet-an-adult at her current age.
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Post by Rhewlif_Dewdrop on Jul 28, 2016 12:54:39 GMT
Aureus Lunae The character's fluffs looks good and so does the mechanics. Just one thing, you get one egg at start and then another egg move later on. Check the back of the September Playtest to learn how egg moves are learned. JPThunda A truly detailed character. There is nothing wrong with the mechanics, that I can see anyway.
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Post by gameofchampions on Jul 28, 2016 14:13:10 GMT
That's my bad, I checked and I linked an older copy of the sheet when I was playing around with various things. I'll post the sheet I finished later today.
Ok I can change the name... I'm thinking Noba Kya! I also have a couple ideas as to backstory and making it in keeping with the setting. I may pm you if I have some more questions about it.
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Post by matanui3 on Jul 28, 2016 15:53:27 GMT
Might as well post this here now. Presenting a Main Tank, fluff pending.
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Post by wyomon on Jul 28, 2016 20:10:13 GMT
Does the egg move have to have DB 7 max before or after applying STAB?
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Post by Elyander on Jul 28, 2016 20:13:20 GMT
Rhewlif_DewdropAhh, for some reason I must have thought characters were already level 6, that's why the Expert Skill and bonus Edge. Most likely I saw the number of Edges to choose and got confused. It's hopefully all fixed now!
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Post by Rhewlif_Dewdrop on Jul 28, 2016 20:32:00 GMT
No problem, gameofchampions. matanui3 I look forward to seeing Jun's fluff. Just so you know, you are missing your 2nd level bonus edge and your 5th level bonus feature. wyomon I didn't know the answer so I asked in the site's OOC skype group. They say before so you don't have to account for STAB. Elyander Yep, all good now. And I figured as much so no worries. If I come off as short, it's just me trying to review everything quickly.
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Post by Elyander on Jul 28, 2016 20:41:47 GMT
Rhewlif_Dewdrop I'll probably throw another application in, cause I kinda have a nice idea for it. I just wanted to confirm something first for Yù: Is Magnitude an acceptable starting Egg Move? It's DB is 5+1d6, so I wasn't sure you were gonna accept it. I took it mostly because it grants Groundshaper, which is a good defensive ability and mesh well with Earth, and Nosepass only other move that fits the playtest rule is Rollout, which is the opposite of the patient Style I'm going for. If Magnitude isn't good to start, could I then have two egg moves to be learned later on? Both Endure and Stealth Rock are interesting defensive options, which would be learned at 20 and 30.
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Post by Rhewlif_Dewdrop on Jul 28, 2016 20:52:31 GMT
ElyanderWell... I'm a big fan of ground shaper... But I feel like a lot of Underdog Pokémons don't get ground shaper until they've leveled and evolves but... Sure it can be a Nosepass thing and it falls under the Rule of Cool. If in the end you want to do the other option you mentioned for egg moves you can. Putting out another is a good idea so long as you have the time. I look forward to it.
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Post by wyomon on Jul 28, 2016 22:46:55 GMT
Also, because I can't help but enjoy making characters Here's Xueman LinAnd I'll put in my first character here too Weisheng Khoo
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Post by gameofchampions on Jul 28, 2016 23:23:13 GMT
OK I believe that I fixed everything that was wrong and while I still don't have any fluff yet I believe I fixed the mechanics. Here is Noba Hyung a Cacnea pressure point style martial artist.
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Post by FelixSparks on Jul 29, 2016 2:34:08 GMT
Meet my four Monklings! They're very eager to get going. From the temple of flames, Lei Hou!From the Temple of Water, Mika Lee!From the Temple of Steel, Qiepian Dao!And finally, from the Temple of Wood, Shugan!
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Post by JPThunda on Jul 29, 2016 5:05:25 GMT
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Post by Elyander on Jul 30, 2016 2:11:58 GMT
Well, I decided to go with a second character (and maybe a third, if I finish her on time), after all. Presenting Goutte, a former circus kid who became a surprisingly proficient warrior. Also, I wanted to make sure nothing was wrong with my first submission, because it has an interrogation sign after complete. I think everything is in order with both applications, so please, tell me if there's anything in need of change, ok?
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Post by twilightkiwi on Jul 30, 2016 18:47:08 GMT
Finally polished my first character idea - that Metal Oracle - to a degree I hope is satisfactory. Here's Yuyan Yin, acolyte of the Silver Mirror. Please let me know if there are any changes you'd prefer for Oracle to be acceptable. Of course, now I have the dilemma that I'm not sure which of my characters I'd prefer to play.
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