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Post by nadodan on Jul 24, 2016 7:39:20 GMT
@flamefist About the no camera, I also noticed you don't have anything like a notepad. I mean I don't mind no camera but I feel like there needs to be something she uses to chronicle. However this a bit of a gray area since there isn't any offical requirements that say that, so I won't force you to spend starting cash on it. blkattk Flamefist is right, if you want to have Cheerleader you need to have Inspired training. Also I'm not sure if this is intentional or an error but your background (which says Reason for First Jump now) is blank. However other parts of your fluff seem to allude to it. Like the part about seeing something he thought was a legendary.
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Post by flamefist96 on Jul 24, 2016 8:12:36 GMT
Oh yeah, Sorry, How much for a note pad? Or can I just fluff have it? I'm perfectly willing to pay for it and shift around funds to
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Post by nadodan on Jul 24, 2016 8:21:07 GMT
@flamefist, Hmm I thought there was an item like that in PTU but I guess I was thinking about PTA, A Writers kit. It's basically 2 Notebooks and 4 pens and 4 pencils for 20 pyen, and that sounds fine to me.
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Post by flamefist96 on Jul 24, 2016 8:43:43 GMT
Sounds good to me, I'll take it, leaving me with a piddly 80 yen, and still no pokeballs, but all the random stuff my character might need besides them.
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Post by Llyarden on Jul 24, 2016 9:30:04 GMT
Amber's fluff is now added. Might do a bit more tinkering until the deadline, but she's basically complete now.
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Post by nadodan on Jul 24, 2016 9:42:06 GMT
Llyarden Looks good, the one little niggle is the Razor Claw, I'm alright with you having it since it's a fairly generic item that could be given to any pokemon so having it in advance doesn't show foreknowledge of the pokemon she would be getting, just please refrain from using it's effects in the first battle if you are picked.
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Post by Llyarden on Jul 24, 2016 11:34:39 GMT
Yeah I picked it because it complements Amber's battling style rather than her Pokemon's (from a fluff perspective it's something one of her parents used in their League challenge.) Not quite sure why you wouldn't want it equipped in the first fight - equipping an item is a Standard action if I remember rightly - but sure.
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Post by purrloin on Jul 24, 2016 14:00:56 GMT
Anything against Shell Bell? It does seem to be occult kind of item.
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Post by blkattk on Jul 24, 2016 20:58:54 GMT
fixed my character and decided to go with ace trainer. i put the "IMG, 1" but it still wont show.
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Post by DataNinja on Jul 24, 2016 21:20:56 GMT
fixed my character and decided to go with ace trainer. i put the "IMG, 1" but it still wont show. I took a look, and you're linking to a site url, and not an image url. An image url would end in .jpg, .png, or something of the sort.
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Post by kmckinni on Jul 24, 2016 21:25:34 GMT
Also the url leads to a 404 error, to top it off.
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Post by nadodan on Jul 25, 2016 0:17:52 GMT
Llyarden . It's alright if hand it over in the battle if it's just a standard, just don't treat your pokemon as already holding it. It will make sense in context and right now I'm just trying to avoid spoilers purrloin A Shell bell is fine as well since it's an item that can be given to any pokemon blkattk Okay things look a bit more in order you have your background in. However you accidently put Ace Trainer into your training feature slot. What you should have is Inspired Training in your Training Feature slot, Than Ace Trainer,Cheer Leader,Cheer Brigade, and Elite Trainer in the space under Features. Than put Brutal Training down in that area that says Bonus Features/Edges from classes. I mean your choice of Features makes sense in the Feature tab, the information in the trainer tab is just a little jumbled. Edit:However if you want to have Cheer brigade you need to have Charm at Adept not Novice. Edit 2:And you need to have Novice Command for Ace Trainer.
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Post by flamefist96 on Jul 25, 2016 1:11:00 GMT
Oh yeah nadodan, i added mikan islands tobky archives, pointless in the grand scheme of things if thats fine.
I also messed around with my inventory, got rid of my flippers, and bought other items and the notebook
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Post by gameofchampions on Jul 25, 2016 1:13:47 GMT
So how do you feel about props just for fluff and stuff like that? I'm toying with the idea of having Isen have a cool cane for dramatic effects in battle like taping the ground to have a Pokemon finish a dig attack or correspond a certain attack to the number of taps he hits the ground. It wouldn't work as a weapon or have any other effects other then fluff stuff for dramatic appeal. Every top tier trainer needs a bit
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Post by nadodan on Jul 25, 2016 1:47:34 GMT
@flamefist That's fine, she lived there it's a pretty sure bet she would have chronicled it.
@gameofchamps That is fine as long as he never uses it as a weapon. If you do I'll have someone pop up and give you a one time fine in the amount of a crude weapon cost.
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Post by gameofchampions on Jul 25, 2016 1:58:41 GMT
@flamefist That's fine, she lived there it's a pretty sure bet she would have chronicled it. @gameofchamps That is fine as long as he never uses it as a weapon. If you do I'll have someone pop up and give you a one time fine in the amount of a crude weapon cost. Totally fair and can't argue with that. I may, at a later point, get one that could work as a crude weapon but if I do before hand the fine is completely fair. Seems like a fun thing to add and I will put it in the description.
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Post by Lockdown on Jul 25, 2016 3:03:24 GMT
Okay, got his backstory and stats done, still need to gear him up and fill in his dreams, personality, physical description and pick a proper Nature for his starter. Charlie Fairview
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Post by nadodan on Jul 25, 2016 3:19:26 GMT
Lockdown Alright looking good so far, but could you leave the part out of requesting a Slowpoke ahead of time. Like I've said your character's won't know what pokemon is available ahead of time. However when the time comes to pick you could act out that reasoning as to why he grabs Slowpoke (The balls will be clearly marked with the names of the pokemon)
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Post by gameofchampions on Jul 25, 2016 4:15:56 GMT
OK I finished the backstory for Isen! Hopefully it's good and let me know if there are any issues. I may make a few minor fluff changes but this is the gist of it. So my sheet is all done now.
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Post by nadodan on Jul 25, 2016 5:42:19 GMT
gameofchampions I looked over your sheet and everything looks alright except a couple things, First your Mudkip doesn't have an Egg move (Not required just want to make sure you knew about you could have one) and You bought a TM, now honestly this is a bit of a weird gray area because Mudkip can't learn Bulldoze (Marshstomp can so an argument that Bulldoze shows foreknowledge). I'd perfer it if you waited to buy it TMs are things you can buy with Banked cash and you won't be able to use it on Mudkip right away anyway.
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