Post by kagemaru656 on Mar 18, 2017 16:22:03 GMT
As previously mentioned in the skype chat, here is some feedback in case any edits are needed with a full week left to put them in. I will try to do similar Thursday/Friday evening So there is still some edit time before deadline
General Note:
For those that missed it in the skype chat the Tutor Move you can take as part of char gen is free (0 TP). Make a note somewhere of what it is so it's easier to tell what should or shouldn't be on the move lists.
Player Name | Character Name | Feedback |
sixer | Sebastion Smith | You've forgotten your training feature. Could you make a note of which move is the tutor move an which has Accuracy Training? |
drallore | Thatch | You've listed "edgy stuff" under dislikes but that seems to be 45% of the character? Especially the bit about the Dad's friend. |
drallore | Leon | You should stat Shaymin Ground as well, you gain both Formes once gaining the Pokémon. I'm looking for characters that are able to travel alone, having only one night off from his job doesn't quite fit that. I'm sure we'll be makign excuses to families either way but it would be good to not have that much expectation of immediately being back. |
drallore | Lancre | You forgot to list Psionic Sight on the Feature tab |
Tsushimii | Mildred Ellison | Note which move is the tutor move for each mon |
Greenwolfkate | Karen Laurel | You haven't marked down Handyman and Call to Adventure |
Greenwolfkate | Tamara Mcbay | List the tutor move and what Accuracy Training is applied to |
sathzur | Wayne Kemp | Your EC(s) are free so they should be in the bonus edges section, that measn one more edge for you. I don't see mention of your previous team of Pokémon, which will need to include a Dragon type for your EC. You haven't listed Brutal Training on your features tab. If you have a tutor move make note of which one that is. |
SuperVaderMan | WIP | Don;t forget to list all your features and edges when you get aroudn to finishing this. Make note of tutor moves. |
Rhewlif | Neolani Pele | Only the 4 players themselves are supposed to be the "Four Lucky Winners" and oyu're looking to bring the Boyfriend NPC along. I can possibly work around it but it isn't ideal. |
Lichlord | Gil Seeka | You still need to pick the second part of Researcher, you pick that when you take the class. The Mento Base class is missing from the Feature's tab. If you have a tutor move make note of which. |
Crow | Robert | If you have tutor moves mark them down. |
Felix | Luke | Don't forget to allocate your stat points. Make note of which move was tutored as well |
General Note:
For those that missed it in the skype chat the Tutor Move you can take as part of char gen is free (0 TP). Make a note somewhere of what it is so it's easier to tell what should or shouldn't be on the move lists.