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Post by catch22 on Oct 24, 2016 8:22:49 GMT
ChanceFluff done, any and all critique or proof-reading welcome.
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Post by wyomon on Oct 24, 2016 14:17:45 GMT
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Post by flamefist96 on Oct 26, 2016 0:09:58 GMT
Let's go through the apps again,
Both of your app's I'myourbiggestdonphan need fluff, and the edits I asked for before. Plus I think you mis-read the pokemon levels.
Next point, Chance needs a legendary connection. Not completely necessary to be part of his character, just that he needs one. Plus a name for his skill background if possible?
Then for David Crowder, No comments as of yet, other than wanting to make a Biddoff joke.
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Post by imyourbiggestdonphan on Oct 26, 2016 5:48:39 GMT
Sorry. Went out of town. Wi'll do later tonight or tomorrow. We do get 4 pokemon right? I just need to level adjust? Also, do you have a deadline?
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Post by flamefist96 on Oct 26, 2016 6:03:32 GMT
the pokemon levels are
14 13 8 1
you have pokemon at level 3 not level 13 like they should be. I already made some comments about lowering Spike's age as well.
There is no date as of yet.
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Post by imyourbiggestdonphan on Oct 26, 2016 6:06:27 GMT
Right. I thought I had fixed spike. Sorry. On it
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Post by imyourbiggestdonphan on Oct 26, 2016 7:28:35 GMT
Backgrounds are fixed. Pokemon will have to wait till tomorrow
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Post by flamefist96 on Oct 26, 2016 8:20:20 GMT
Weird... I thought i mentioned it, but I'm your biggest donphan, you've forgotten to add the touched edges you get for free.
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Post by imyourbiggestdonphan on Oct 26, 2016 17:29:46 GMT
Knock on wood. They should be totally fixed. I did trade Ponyta for Onix on Spike, but besides that the only changes were the ones you mentioned.
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Post by flamefist96 on Oct 30, 2016 20:23:04 GMT
Hey guys, my sincerest, and deepest apologizes. The player from my campaign who had been gone for 3 weeks, and wasn't responding to messages, which prompted this recruitment has come out of the wood work, and explained the situation. She'll be able to come back to playing the game.
So I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to cancel recruitment for this. I'm seriously sorry.
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Post by flamefist96 on Nov 15, 2016 7:44:04 GMT
Alright... so this is awkward. My player dropped off the face of the earth again. I'm looking to replace them.
Please post here if your still interested, and other people feel free to drop apps now to consider being put in. The requirements are the same as before.
I'll pick someone when I manage to move out the character. Which should take about a week.
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Post by wyomon on Nov 15, 2016 10:29:45 GMT
I'm still interested, so here is David Crowder again He's a Survivalist/Researcher with a specialization in Climatology and Pokémon Caretaking
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Post by catch22 on Nov 16, 2016 14:55:04 GMT
ChanceFluff done, any and all critique or proof-reading welcome.
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Post by Nocturne on Nov 16, 2016 21:39:42 GMT
I'd like to present Troy Beaumont, a young chef on a journey of improvement. I apologize in advance for some of the horrible min maxing I did with his starter. Also, is it a problem that Troy doesn't have a lot of money anymore? Should I tone down the purchases? Any feedback on the character is also appreciated. I didn't write as much for the backstory as I usually do, so if I there's anything I should elaborate on please tell me.
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Post by eltrou on Nov 17, 2016 12:51:03 GMT
Raimundo RiveraI am new here but I thought I'd try my hand at applying for a PBP. Here's the char. I might make two versions of him for funsies. Edit: Oops forgot about that. Does it work now Nocturne?
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Post by Nocturne on Nov 17, 2016 13:24:18 GMT
Just a note eltrou you need to share your google sheet. You can do this by clicking the Share button at the top right, making sure its set to "anyone with the link can view" and then copy the link that gives you and use that link here
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Post by eltrou on Nov 17, 2016 13:51:32 GMT
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Post by Nocturne on Nov 17, 2016 14:19:41 GMT
Works just fine now.
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Post by cbeck785 on Nov 17, 2016 14:59:24 GMT
When does recruitment close? I should have something done by tonight after I get home from work.
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Post by flamefist96 on Nov 17, 2016 19:37:36 GMT
IT closes probabaly in a couple days, I'm waiting on my players to move the previous character out and set the stage for which ever character I choose to come in.
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